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:iconkuejena:
The art is very well done. It's cute, adorable, and easy to redraw in your own style. The hair style is very cute~
To make this better (and to make better adopts if you plan to make more), I would add more to it. Not so much where it's too busy and too hard to redraw, but enough to give it character. The yellow squiggles are very good. It adds something more. The thing about adopts is that you're not buying the art but the character, and while this is very well made, it could still use detail. Again, this one is still very good and does have character, but try being more creative, adding patterns and styles and unique details to make it truly one of a kind.
Overall though, this is very well made.
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3 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconamy-senpaii:
Amy-Senpaii Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so much for the critic :heart:
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:iconkuejena:
Kuejena Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Oh yay, you're welcome! I hope it didn't sound harsh. I really like your adopt it's cute (but i has no points to get it ;n;). It's a lot more original than tons of adopts I've seen and that's good. I hope you sell her~
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:iconamy-senpaii:
Amy-Senpaii Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no it didn't sounds harsh ^^
but thank you <33
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:iconkuejena:
Kuejena Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
I'm glad! And of course, anytime! I always enjoy someone who can take constructive criticism.
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:iconamy-senpaii:
Amy-Senpaii Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe ^^
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